Floetry...
So theres a concept poem ive had swimming around in my mind for a couple of months now, and i finally got started on it. I dont wanna give away the concept just yet, but here is a VERY preliminary version of how it is gonna start. Its wack, but it'll get fixed dont worry. Peep...What is this?
Feeling that I feeling that I feel inside.
Feels like a piece of me just died…
Along with those 5
Palestinians
Who got hit by a tank shell
Claims of Lineage
Imprisoned nations without bail
Soundin silly when
A kid grows up right there
Grabs a semi and
Unloads on everyone with no care
But Israeli’s is
Lookin Blind and got no brail
To why the city is
Waving black flags and rife-els
Like I said, it needs work. Ive been having trouble translating my feelings into rhyme which is why its taken me so long. Insha Allah I will have an easier time with it later.
posted by Iboo LaL @ 9:27 PM
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